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Manuscript Critique Services: Expert Feedback on Your Draft

A critique is a diagnosis. We read the manuscript and tell you what the book is trying to be, where it loses that aim, and which problem is worth fixing first. It is not a line edit wearing a longer note.

An open manuscript on a desk
A writing desk by a window

The read

The whole draft, once, the way a stranger meets it.

The letter

What the book is, and the breaks that actually matter.

The order

What to fix first, and what can wait.

The limit

We do not pretend a letter is a rewrite.

Pages marked for revision
The letter before the revision

The brief

You should be able to argue with the letter.

A useful critique is specific. Not “the middle sags.” Which chapters repeat a point. Which character never wants anything the plot can refuse. Where the promise of the opening is not the promise of the ending. You should be able to disagree, because the claim is clear enough to disagree with.

We do not mark every sentence. That would be a different service and a worse use of a first read. The letter names two or three structural problems and the evidence. If the honest note is that the book is closer than you fear, we say that too, and we say what “closer” still requires.

  • A written critique tied to chapters, not a vibe.
  • A short list of what to do next, in order.
  • No rewrite until you ask for one.

How the read runs

Five steps. The pencil stays in its pocket at first.

  1. The cold read

    Once through, without a theory we are trying to prove.

  2. The real problem

    We separate the flaw that changes the book from the ones that only annoy.

  3. The letter

    Plain language, with the pages that show the point.

  4. The next job

    Revise it yourself, book a developmental edit, or stop. We will say which.

  5. One conversation

    You push back. A critique that cannot survive a question was too vague.

What we mark

  • A promise on page one that the ending does not keep.
  • A character who exists to agree with the narrator.
  • A middle that restates the opening in cleaner scenes.
  • A lesson the chapters never earn.

What we leave

  • Comma-level notes.
  • A rewritten chapter, unless you hire that separately.
  • Your voice and your name.
  • Every small irritation. We report the ones that matter.

Before you send the manuscript

Questions authors ask first.

How is this different from developmental editing?

A critique tells you what has to change. Developmental editing stays with the book and builds the map you revise from, and can include the conversation that follows. Start with a critique if you want the diagnosis before you commit to a longer job.

How long is the letter?

Long enough to be specific, short enough to use. Usually a few pages, tied to your chapters. A twenty-page essay about your themes is not more useful than four clear pages.

Can you critique a partial draft?

Yes, if the premise is clear and you know you are stuck. We will not pretend a sample is the whole book. The letter will say what the pages in hand can support.

Who owns the notes?

You do. The letter stays yours. We do not quote your premise in a portfolio.

When you are ready

Send the draft you have been defending to yourself.

A full file is best. The chapters where you feel the trouble are enough to start the conversation. Call (833) 688-4166 or write [email protected].

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