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Query Letter and Synopsis Writing Services

A query has one job: to make the right reader ask for pages. A synopsis has another: to show the whole story, including the ending, without turning into a list of events. We write both from the book you actually have.

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The hook

Who, what they want, and what it will cost, in the first lines.

The stake

Why this book, this shelf, and not a description of the theme.

The synopsis

The whole plot, in order, including how it ends.

The fit

A letter aimed at a kind of agent, not at everyone.

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The pages an agent reads first

The brief

We write the door from the book, not from a wish.

Most query drafts bury the person and lead with the theme, or they sound like the back of a different, more famous book. We read enough of the manuscript to know what is true, then we write a letter a stranger can understand in a minute: the protagonist, the want, the obstacle, the stakes, and why you are the one writing it.

The synopsis is where writers start protecting the ending. Agents who asked for a synopsis asked for the ending. We include it, in clear prose, without a joke about spoilers. If the book cannot be summarized because the plot is still fog, we will say that. The letter cannot be better than the book.

  • A query letter in a length someone will finish.
  • A synopsis with the ending intact.
  • One revision after you tell us who it is for.

How the work runs

Five steps between a blurb and a letter.

  1. The book

    We read enough to know the real stake, not the pitch you have been using.

  2. The shelf

    What the book is, in the language agents already use. No invented genre.

  3. The letter

    Hook, story, bio. Cut until a stranger would keep reading.

  4. The synopsis

    Cause and consequence, through the last page.

  5. Your pass

    Names, facts about you, and a target list if you have one. We adjust once.

What we mark

  • An opening that describes the theme instead of the person.
  • A synopsis that hides the ending.
  • Comp titles that are not actually comps.
  • A bio that apologizes for existing.

What we leave

  • A rewrite of the novel itself.
  • A promise of representation. No letter can promise that.
  • Your authorship.
  • A gimmick that would embarrass you in the room.

Before you send the manuscript

Questions authors ask first.

Do I need a finished novel?

For fiction, yes, if you are querying agents who expect a complete manuscript. We can still draft from a partial if you are testing the pitch, and we will not pretend the book is done.

How long are they?

A query is about one page. A synopsis is often one to two pages unless a guideline says otherwise. Send the guidelines if you have them. We do not write a synopsis that ignores the instructions of the person you are sending it to.

Will you personalize every submission?

We write a strong base letter and show you where a sentence should change per agent. Writing fifty unique letters is a different job. The book part should not change every time.

Who owns the letter?

You do. You send it under your name. We do not contact agents for you unless that is a separate, explicit arrangement.

When you are ready

Send the manuscript and the letter you do not trust.

If you have no letter yet, send the book and who you hope will read it. Call (833) 688-4166 or write [email protected].

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